A few thoughts off the top of my head at first quick listen. Understand this is only my opinion..

My main impression so far is that you need to build your hooks better. Some are pretty weak, others are good, but still need work. A bangin hook is everything in Hip Hop.

PLUS, and this I think any producer would tell you.. on many of your songs you take way too much time getting to the hook. A LOT sooner if you want air play. We listen to hundreds if not thousands of songs a month.... it needs to demand my attention right away. Otherwise, I slap the next guy's CD in the player.

I would like to hear more variations in the cadence of your rap. It is VERY similar from song to song in some cases. Maybe a little more thought on how to run from verse to hook to verse again.

There are some great ideas breakin through on some of the songs... i would like to see them developed more.

As far as content of the rap...I would need to take some more time with the music. Cant comment yet on it.



;Dr;